(1)It was 7:15 on the morning of February8,2000. (2) I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.(3)Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third street and make a right turn into Park Road.(4) The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.(5) He fell with a cry. (6)The car didn''t stop but drove at great speed heading west. (7) I noticed the driver was young woman and the plate number was AC864.(8) About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
其中,第一句式The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. 我们也可以用其它表达法:The farm workers warmly welcomed us. 或The people in the farm received us warmly等。
(2)注意用词表达得当
用词不当,会影响文章内容的正确表达。如:NMET 98的高考书面表达有如下要点:警察罚他们抓住下一个违章者。有的学生用He let us catch an other off ender.这种表达就没有He made us catch the next of fender. 来得恰当。因为文中是因违章被罚,站在路边抓其他违章者一事带有强迫性质,用“let”语意太轻,应改用make。